Timmy a young boy who has just moved home because of bullying; he tries to fit in with the 'gang'. One evening he goes out with his new friends exploring this new town, they end up taking him to this abandoned factory. They all enter; the sweat is dripping of Timmy's face as he knows this is wrong, yet he does it so he can be part of the gang. Timmy is scared as the factory is very big. one of the leaders of the gang says lets split up, so they all split apart yet Timmy does not know that they are not his friends and they all run away and leave him in the factory. Timmy still thinks there in there. As he is walking along hear hears some noises and thinks it his friends as he goes closer and goes round the corner and sees a group of men and a person strapped to a chair. he bursts back round the corner hoping they haven't been seen.
Flashbacks kid bullying him as saying "where your daddy did he leave you" Snap picture of them man in the chair. Snap picture of picture of the daily paper and man missing.
Then men start beating the person punching him in the gut then they take the bag of the mans head. They then untapped his mouth. the man spits at them and shouts 'never'. This voice is very familiar to Timmy.
Horror
derelict house
- Starts off with bike ride
- come across the derelict house
- explore
- creepy stuff happens, noises
- they are being watched
- on there way back its dark, scary
- the scary bomb shelter
- no one dies
second idea
1st person of the person watching
use voice over
use his perception
give reasons why he is doing
watching their lives
when they go to the house he watches them from the window as they come in he is following them round.
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